Final Portfolio

For my final portfolio assignment I will revise five of my 30-Day challenge blog posts. These five posts will be my first blog post "Days 1 and 2", second blog post "The Drought and The Presidencies", fourth blog post "Coffee In Space?", fifth blog post "Enjoying 30-Day Challenge", and my last blog post "My Experience". The reason why I have chosen these is because I think that these posts reflect my experience in the best way through this challenge. I will work on my topic sentences for each of the body paragraphs that I wrote on the posts. I will also work on developing my introduction. Writing an instruction, I believe, is the hardest part of the blog post, since finding an interesting hook can be challenging. Another difficult part of writing a blog post is finding a good conclusion to leave the readers with a unique ending. For that reason, I will try to write more on my conclusion, and I will avoid using predictable sentences like "This challenge made me gain new experiences." I will be also revising some grammar errors. These errors are usually caused by the wrong usage of articles like "the". Another thing that I will be working on is the usage of more interesting words. For this challenge I have always talked about how difficult it was, but in the end I accomplished my goal, and it taught me never to give up, and etc. While writing these sentences I used a lot of everyday words, and during my revision I will try to change most of them to make them sound more interesting, and more different.