Tuesday, December 2, 2014

Feedback for the creative writing

5 strong words or phrases:
1.It's white with red lines on it,it has a red wire as well, and it's quite fashionable.
2.It has two soft ear muffs
3.This headphone was a gift my mom brought me on Christmas the year before last year.
4. I was thinking about a book called " Silence", which was a love story of a girl who hadn't spoke since she was five.
5.He was so energetic, 

5 weak words or phrases:
1.I like using it
2.It looks just like other headphones
3.but after the first time i put it on, everything has changed.
4.I couldn't believe what I saw.
5.it has good sound effects

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