In my essay about the Turkish Food called "Imam Bayildi" I am working on my conclusion, and body paragraphs. My conclusion is really short for now, and it repeats what is in the introduction. I will try making it more general, and add more things using the ideas that are in the body paragraphs. I have my thesis in my conclusion, too. It is one of the things that makes it repetitive. I will talk more about the tales about the food, since they have a big importance in the body paragraphs. I will try making the conclusion more like a closure than a background information. For that I have to add some thoughts that will make the reader tell that they are close to the end of the essay.
For my body paragraphs first, I have to find topic sentences, and develop them more. I think my topic sentences might be a little bit too specific, or too, general, so I’ll make them more about the paragraph that they start. The ending sentences should also be developed in my essay. The connection between paragraphs are not smooth. I need to find the right ending sentences to connect them to each other, and also to the thesis. I need to add more background information to my body paragraphs. Because I have a long introduction paragraph, so I need to make my body paragraphs longer than my introduction paragraph.
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