Saturday, March 28, 2015

Outline Of The Persuasive Essay


the requirement at Cheshire Academy that students participate in three seasons of afternoon activities


I agree with the statement. 
Because:
1.It is helpful for students to gain new experiences by meeting new people, and trying new and different things every season. (Thesis)
2.It is helpful for students to meet new people and learn new things from them. 
3.It is helpful for students to experience new kinds of sports or activities that can help them to get to know their talents better. 
4.It is helpful for students to be involved in different kinds of activities that are not always academic. 

Questions
1.Why do students have to participate in three different activities but not one?
2.Why do these activities have to include sports, or competitive activities?
3.How do these activities help students with their school life?
4.What if students don't like the activities they are doing?
5.How can these activities help the students with their personal lives, and their characteristic?

Experiences
1.Met different people and different teachers through three different seasons. Had the chance to spend time with a lot of different people by doing three different things. More activities, more friends and people to meet. 
2.Managing time, and healthier mind. Sports, changed my nutrition habit. Made it better. Made me happier because of everyday exercise. So I was happier during school days. 
3.More hardworking, learned teamwork, learned to be patient (not good at soccer but then developed). 

1st
Intro: 
1.background info, define
2.Agree/Disagree
3.Why?

2nd
By the answers of question
1st paragraph:1st answer
2nd paragraph:2nd answer
3rd paragraph:3rd answer

3rd 
Conclude:
1.Support thesis
2.Support the experiences
















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