I think that my essay describes the drawing in a descriptive language. I have described the background, the foreground, the objects, the colors and tones and the emotions. I believe that the connections that I made between the emotions and the other parts like colors or background have worked well. Personally I think that I was successful while explaining contrasts and while making connections between paragraphs. I have described the drawing in a descriptive language and have talked about everything that makes this essay a description of a drawing.
On the other hand, I think that I could have talked more about the background of the drawing. I also could have talked more about the red clock that doesn't melt in the drawing. I might have left some unexplained parts about the drawing like the objects that are in the background. I could have add more transitions between the phrases. I could have used more descriptive language to make my essay to be able to be understood by everyone who didn't see the drawing.
Writing about the connections between emotions and other topics was difficult for me since there were a lot to write but they were difficult to realize.
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