Draft of the description of Persistence Of Homework

1st 

About the drawing. Where? When? Who? Why?

2nd

Shapes objects

How does shapes and objects effect the picture. 

3rd

Foreground background

In the foreground there are four clocks that are melting. These clocks show different times. They have different styles. They represent different humans, different lives since they all have different times. The clocks are melting so it means that these lives are going to end soon. It shows us that everyone has a limited amount of time. There is a twig on a table. I believe that the twig and a table has a contrast in them because twig is natural but tables was made by humans. There is also a rock. In the foreground we can't see light. The sun lights the background. 

In the background there is a mountain, a sea and a rectangular shaped wood. The sun lights the mountain so it gives us a positive feeling about the mountain.  

4th

Colors/lights

Different tones of colors and the emotions they give. 

The lights in the scene and the emotion they give. 

5th

Scene/ story

How does the scene effect the painting. 

6th 

Emotion

Depending on colors and lights. 

7th

Contrast

8th 

Conclusion

Thesis

I believe that the painter wants us to know that we have limited times and we shouldn't waste it, because our lives are short.